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Well, my old comment was terrible. I didnt explain what i mean, so i explain now. "So,Hanma Baki is going to defeat Kaoru Hanayama?". "Baki the grappler" manga and anime about fightings, yeah whatever. The joke was in fact that Kaoru Hanayama is much bigger than Hanma Baki, just like Bruce and Zander. But in the end of fight - Baki wins. Hope Zander wins too. 

P.S: i pick here image from anime, because manga sucks in quality even worse.

Another P.S?: Guys who thinks Redline is annoying - you didnt pass the exam

I kinda ducked up lol. I used my real email to to make a donation and I don't wanna risk it getting leaked. How would I go about this?

I don't know of any leaks on itch's end, but I don't pay attention to the email addresses of anyone that donates. But that sounds lile something you would need to contact Itch support for.

Alright thanks. Have a great rest of your day/night.

As cute as Redline is... Please tell me there will be a Bruce route? 😢

FRRR WE NEED ONE THIS INSTANTTT

I like the story, looking forward to knowing what's going to happen next, Bruce is so interesting and hot, but Redline on the other hand... damn he's one of the most annoying characters I've ever seen, and to make matters worse he appears all the time like the game forces him a lot as if he were the cannon romance.

Do you think Brucie is a good pet name? Hmm I wonder if he'd knock out Zander if he dared..

I believe Redlines the cannon romance for this VN (And I do love Redline) But these updates really be making me want a Bruce route.

Same

I hope that we can get both of them.

BRUCENATION RISE UP

Hell yeah! I think this is far most the best chapter i have ever read

Hi! I finished the last built and it's really awesome, but I wanted to know, Redline is the only love interest in this vn?

Idk that smirk on bruce when you had him pinned is sus

Exactly, if Zander has a chance to date Bruce, I would do it :P

This latest build was awesome though I'm quite nervous on what the hell is gonna happen next

just some curiosity, but what’s this?

A devlog, it just goes over some thoughts regarding the update.

OH, itch.io betrayed me, hahaha! When I wrote the comment that link was to like, what itch.io described as an updating of the files 7h before even though the files still said 5.0 and there was no devlog, so I was confused about that (note how the comment predates the devlog’s release, I swear I’m not insane :P )

Thanks for and congrats on the new update, by the way!

Oooh I didn't know it updated people when I add the files, even if I hide them...very good knowledge. Thank you!

Hey, so my pc detected that the round 6 update was a Trojan virus called "wacatac." Not to sound accusatory, but what's up with that???

That's strange, not sure why anything would be flagged. Lots of other people have been downloading and playing without issue, so I can assure you there's nothing wrong with it.

Oh alright then. Thanks for responding. 👍

Redline is SO owed a dozen or so apologies from Zander 

soooooo true

Will this VN ever have a community discord?

Thank you for asking! Most likely not, as I don't expect the project to grow too large. And on my current release schedule, the VN will be done sometime next year, so there wouldn't be much activity after that. Thank you for expressing interest, though!

If not a VN discord server how's about a telegram chat just to talk about the VN? ^^;
The reason why I'm asking is mostly because aside from itch I'm not entirely sure where the discourse and enthusiasm for the VN is funneling into. And this VN already has a channel that people just can't exactly comment on. That and it also feels a bit strange that the main places the VN is talked about is in the servers of other VNs... ^^;

Just had to come here and say I love Redline so much. He is my favorite yeen and i will protect him at all costs

This situation is so unbelievable. We have no details on the contract. Zander is just so stupid. More optimal solution would be to seek legal action and cover the story in media, or just purposefully lose those matches. And for weeks he just ignores Redline that clearly have problems. This is so surreal. But despite all that it's still enjoyable.

FRRR my first reaction to that was dude get a lawyer

Hey may i know Drayden full names ?

and i need a permission since Drayden is your character story, can i use him as my profile picture and can i use his name on my nickname ?

he's been my favorite character so far and i simp him with me which idk why i can't get him out of my mind, its okay if you don't want to, and thank you so much

I don't know what type of dinosaur Bruce is supposed to be but... I may want him to do stuff to me...

not the things he's done to zander so far but...

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It's only on its fifth build but there's a lot to read I love it. I'm not a writer so I don't know much about good writing but it's really good in my opinion.

RED MY BABY IS SAUR CUTE AUGHHHHH (He's capable of beating the shii out of me), and Drayden too. I like Drayden.

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Btw, I know that there will be no sexual scene in this vn but there is "romance" in genre list. So I wanna know if there will be romance option or it will be a linear vn?

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Redline is such a cutie patootie😭😭😭

I understand the circumstances but it'll be hard for me to forgive Zander for being such a dick to my precious boy

Сan't wait for the update, especially the one where Zander and Redline will have a heart-to-heart conversation(hopefully) 

Could his behavior to Redline be a result of a bad reaction to cuteness overload?

I hope so, otherwise there is no excuse for him

Backups don't work Can't save

The writing of this is so good. Really excited for the next update. Definitely one of the  best visual novels I have ever played.

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OK SO DOES THIS GO THRU YOUR FILES TO FIND YOUR NAME OR IS IT PURE COINCIDENCE THAT ZANDERS MESSED UP PROFIL NAME IS ALEX FOR SHORT AND ALEXANDER MASON IN FULL CAUSE IM BAFFLED WITH THE FACT ITS NAME DROPPING ME... anyway now that that's done

Anyway. If I had a nickel for every visual novel I've played that I've dissociated into the character for and had a panic attack because of it I'd have 3 nickels which is much BUT IS WEIRD ITS HAPPEND THRICE TIMES 2 of which were in this one. My heart rate literally jumped in sequence with his and before the fights and during the nightmare like nono no comfy is me.

Anyway long comment huh

Edit: add another nickel... this is such a good story and I'm literally not even that far in can't wait for further

Also backstory is woof alot also I was scream thats a symptom when he said he's dissociates and that he doesn't want to cause problems by sharing his anyway slay

I have finished the new chapter in about an hour and it's so cool! Now the story is going to be interesting instead of reading a depressing situation

Poor zander hes the main character but has no plot armor😭

Bruce or Redline? 

Agh Leo! Why do you got to make me question my taste in men!? 😂😂😂 (I'm joking)

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Redline has astronomically high cuteness levels, and thus is the ideal choice :) .

I chose Bruce but I was still able to hold hands with Red so maybe you're not limited to one and can do stuff with both of them perhaps together 🤭. Awesome game.

Is  there an update?

Next month i suppose

I'm planning for a July release on the next build

Awesome!

This game is playing Ping-Pong with how much my opinion of Bruce is changing.

The writing in this is absolutely amazing. Every time Zander felt down, I was on the verge of tears myself because of that feeling of powerlessness and hopelessness. Great story!  😭

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